“Maybe
change the split screen so it is showed all in one, but show the good side of
Dawn (main character in our production) then the evil
side”
“It
might be more effective if you showed Dawn’s evil side through the
mirror"
“Another character so there could be a
murder"
“More footage would have helped me understand your
production more”
“Narration
or subtitles would have made the story line clearer. For example ‘one girl’ ‘one
creepy day’ ‘a world full of secrets’ before Andriana says
“shhhh”
The
feedback that we got about mirroring Dawn's evil side through the morror was one
of the problems we encountered when fliming. We tried this effect but it didnt
work in the way we wanted it to, because when we tried to film in a mirror, the
angle we had to film it from made it hard to clearly see 'Dawns' facial
expressions, so we decided to cut that clip from our final production.
Also if we
changed our production so it would be without the split sreen, it would be even
more confusing for the audience.
Another problem we encountered was when we recorded
dialogue, the words spoken were not very clear, to resolve this we took several
recordings; However each recording had the same problem.
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